Cold Wat

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Case Study Analysis Peer revaluation Form

Writers Name___robert marsh__________________________

refs Name________Damon Walton___________________



1. Reviewer mind: What is the authors thesis?
What went wrong ABC inc


2. Reviewer doubtfulness: Is the thesis clearly stated? If not, how would you help the writer restate it?
Yes clearly it was


Writer indecision: List the changes do base on this feedback. Also tend those suggestions that were offered but that you did not make, and rationalise why you did not make the suggestions.



3. Reviewer question: Does the essays body stick to the main emergence? If not, where does it digress, and how could the writer revise the story to make it stay more(prenominal) on the main topic?
Body hit solely the key points


Writer question: List the changes do establish on this feedback. Also list those suggestions that were offered but that you did not make, and formulate why you did not make the suggested changes.



4. Reviewer question: Does the paper contain any ambiguously-worded or confusing sentences? Please list them below and offer a suggested range for each ane you identify.
Sentences were clear and concise


Writer question: List the changes made based on this feedback.



Also list those suggestions that were offered but that you did not make, and explain why you did not make the suggested changes.



5. Reviewer question: Which ending strategy did the writer use? Is the closing substanceive? why or why not? Offer a revision suggestion for making the closing more effective.
List whole the things that went wrong and offered clear solutions and reccomendations


Writer question: List the changes made based on this feedback. Also list those suggestions that were offered but that you did not make, and explain why you did not make the suggested changes?



6. Reviewer question: Please give the writer feedback regarding the essays effect on you.
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